Man Loves Mary
24
Sep/060
Sep/060
Man Loves Mary
Mary Held Her Baby Boy. Your opinion please?
A manger was His nursery
No soft pillow for His head
Mary laid Her newborn baby
on the hay that make His bed.
Soon Kings would bow before Him
but for now She would enjoy
every Mothers treasured moment
Mary held Her baby Boy
Precious baby,son of Mary,Lamb of Gods amazing Grace
before Wise Men beheld you
Mary kissed your blessed face
No words can explain it
But every Mother knows the joy
while the World quietly waited
Mary held Her baby boy
Lord Jesus,God has named you
You shall the Souls of Man
The kingdom to salvation
is in your tiny hand
One day God would reclaim Him
but that did not dim Her joy
Heaven watched as She loved Him
Mary held Her baby boy
I meant to write"You shall save the soul of Man"
You did a really nice job. The only critiquing I would do is:
the line that starts the second verse is kind of oddly written, I understand the message but it looks odd.
The second question is in the third verse You shall the Souls of Man, did you mean to add "save" in that line? It looks unfinished. Over all very nicely written.
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